Postdestined (a short story)

Way back in 2005 I published, in an anthology, a truly awful short story entitled Postdestined. It's about a trip into hell. I remember I was limited to 5000 words. That makes character development near impossible--which given that I lack the skill it doesn't really matter. (I think Dickens had sentences longer than 5000 words).

I have lost the electronic copy. But for your amusement here is a scanned version.

It has some mild swearing (no F-bombs). Let's call it PG13.